Story!

I am writing a vampire story. It's a love story but I'mma put action in it too.

It's like a love hate relationship. The girl, Melanie, just lost her love and isn't quite able to get over it, even after three years. She comes across Kyle, who happens to be a vampire. He can do anything but read her eyes to see what's inside her. This leads to attraction and he ends up falling in love with her. But she can't find a way to return the affection. He keeps struggling to get her affections, which seems a little successful on her side. But since she can't give him her love, he is busy trying to get his mortality back.

In part 2: Kyle is working harder to get his mortality back. He goes through physical changes as well, like the whitening of his hair which have stayed young brown color for 750 years. He is reaching mortality but because of Melanie he loses it again only for her.

I hope it'll be good. Almost finished part 1!